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Three Simple Words by ~kewpuss:iconkewpuss:



That day could be considered as one of the best days of her life. There was no dinner or dancing. It was nothing special. It started simply. A movie. A comedy.

The movie had ended and she had many things on her mind. It was racing with thoughts and feelings. She held his hand. He held hers. Very simply, he had proclaimed that he wanted a cigarette so they went down one flight of stairs. This is where I always smoke, he explained. She had simply nod her head and smiled. She didn't mind him smoking. In fact she had always loved the smell of cigarette smoke on a guy mixed with his perfume.

She leaned into him. He kissed her. She could taste the smoke in his mouth but she didn't care. She kissed him back.

They decided to go down one more flight of stairs and that's where they both saw it. A small corner hidden from view. A corner that would very soon become theirs. They made their way there.

Her heart was beating fast. She didn't know why. Possibly the prospect of having a corner with someone. A corner that would later on hold so many memories. She leaned against the wall. He kissed her. She kissed him back. That's when he did something. Said something. Something that would stick with her for as long as she lives. He said the words. The words that she had been longing to hear. I love you. She had cried. Happy tears. She tried to hide it from him but she wasn't successful. There it was. Three simple words that caused such a great impact. She calmed down a little. I love you too. She had been meaning to say those words for a long time. She cried even more out of the purest form of happiness. He hugged her. She hugged him back.

She started the kiss this time.
©2006-2009 ~kewpuss
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Random. Felt like submitting something. I'm not that sure if it's in the right category. There you go Mei, a deviation..

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:iconkewpuss:
Thank you Savannah.. I wasn't sure if it was Devart worthy though.. I may have to delete it one day..

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:iconlethewards:
it is.. i think it's so clear and simple and honest - there are no long, complex lines to distract from the bare meaning and emotions... it's great. i love it - don't delete it dude!
:iconkewpuss:
Thankings chicka. Means a lot to me =)

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<3 Puss
:iconfeargonewrong:
The purest form of happiness... i like that...
its amazing how an area like a corner can hold so many memories..

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~Pull harder On my Strings, do what you will with me, you will never control me~ :chainsaw:
:iconmatrixadi:
ahh...so sweet...

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:iconmeizerrrs:
wow....love this puss. it's so honest and well, happy. *happy tears* (hahaha i'm too lazy to find the emoticon. gotta go to skool. nyeh)

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:halfliquid: mei.
:iconkewpuss:
Thankings dude =)

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